Wednesday, 27 February 2008

  • No Idea what Inspired This...

    ~~~The City~~~
    I saw the city from afar,
    Burning from within; a self-important star.
    The glowing lights dazzled my eyes,
    Filling my head with decorative lies.
    It was a dream I chased to no avail;
    All along they knew I'd fail -
    Because the City of Lights only enchants,
    But never administers entrance
    To a world of gold and glory,
    It's just another fictional story.
    Behind the glitz and glamour,
    And the lips that stammer,
    Is a city of a thousand corpses and graves;
    Their blood and sweat paves
    The road for the rich and wealthy;
    Here indifference is healthy.

    Fatally Yours,
    Dead End Poet

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  • anonymous

    Oooh, I like this poem a lot! I can see a city like New York or Hollywood or Las Vegas fitting very well here.

    RYC: Well, I had been very into vampires at the time. Underworld or Underworld: Evo had come out, I was trying to muddle through Dracula, and I read other newer books with vampires, and my ex was very into vampires, too. ^^;; So I took what I read about the typical "romantic" vampires and wrote the poem.

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