Friday, 28 March 2008

  • random poem

    Here it is - the undeniable
    and unbearable pain, tearing
    right through me sharper than knives.
    It cuts without a care, ripping
    my lungs in two, gasping
    for breath, but it doesn't stop there - no.
    Like a tidal wave this pain washes
    over me, crushing and drowning.
    Throw out my arms and I'll float
    away on violent waves of memory;
    Let this pain carry me where it will,
    I've got no will left to live like this.
    I can't carry on, but soon as it starts
    it stops. Reached the dead end,
    abruptly and completely. Now
    where to? I've got to ask.
    Never let but a few tears fall,
    got no time nor patience
    for heart-wrenching misery, drowning
    in blood-red memories throbbing,
    pulsing like a separate beating heart -
    oh memory, how cruel you've been to me;
    so violently, so suddenly you appear,
    and leave just as quickly as
    happiness does when she flies out the window.
    This is it - the undeniable, unbearable,
    misunderstood heart-ache with which I continue to live.

Comments (1)

  • Adamission12

    I gave you 5 stars this is sadly true Im sure I dont know what it is about poetry but it makes me write some pretty depressics poems myself although I live quite a pleasant life in general.... Tomorow you should do something just for you maybe youll cheer up.... Or maybe your just like me where when you sit down and start penning a poem the negative words come rushing to the tip.... Wow I like that I may just use that in a poem...

    Good writing wishes....

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