Monday, 21 September 2009
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~~~Cigarettes and Silhouettes~~~
Cigarettes become silhouettes
ground into the wet pavement,
burnt after-images of a moment already lost;
time gone by, life unreclaimed-and every day another joins the past,
insignificant physical reminders
of a life that too will soon pass.like cigarettes ground into the pavement,
the ashes of memory littered upon the ground
as cigarettes become silhouettes;
burnt after-images of a moment already passed.
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Comments (7)
loved this. very beautiful.
@thomas_michael - I tried. And considering that I was actually semi-inspired for the first time in what feels like forever, I guess it came out okay.
it came out great. really loved it.
loved it, as always. its the first in awhile i've read of yours but i did love the comparisons.
@dancingthroughmyimperfections - you are such a good friend<3 I'm not kidding, no one's had a better best friend than I do. I don't know anyone else I could order to give me comments about shit they really don't care about and be nice about it. xP I love you~
Looks great, you have a knack for killer last lines.
@DarklyLitWords - haha thanks. That means a lot to me actually.