Thursday, 10 May 2012

  • A Shout out and a Recommendation.

    @Awoolham has always been an inspiration to me since I started XWS and she was my fist victim—I mean candidate! I love Aye’s unique perspective and her brash honesty in her blogs. I admire her ability to appreciate poetry. In the last four years of undergrad I’ve struggled with poetry: do I love it or do I hate it? I hated it for the last four years, and I loved it before that, and now that I’m officially done (at least until I find out I don’t get to graduate) with my undergrad, I think I’m finally back to loving poetry. Only this time I have four years worth of books and education to help me appreciate others poetry in a way I never could before. I still read for the purpose of enjoyment and enlightenment, but perhaps now I can find inspiration and value in things I thought I hated the last four years. So I’ve begun reading one of my text books from my Sophomore year again, and I came across some poems I find particularly inspiring, and I thought I’d share them with you. I also like some of the author’s comments, so I thought I’d include those too in quotations.

     

    From A Book of Luminous Things by Czeslaw Milosz:

     

    “The secret of all art, also of poetry, is, thus, distance.”

    “Remembering, we move to that land of past time, yet now without our former passions: we do not strive for anything, we are not afraid of anything, we become an eye which perceives and finds details that had escaped our attention.”

    DAVID WAGONER

    THE AUTHOR OF AMERICAN ORNITHOLOGY SKETCHES A BIRD, NOW EXTINCT

    When he walked through town, the wing-shot bird he’d hidden

    Inside his coat began to cry like a baby,

    High and plaintive and loud as the calls he’d heard

    While hunting it in the woods, and goodwives stared

    And scurried indoors to guard their own from harm.

     

    And the innkeeper and the goodmen in the tavern

    Asked him whether his child was sick, then laughed.

    Slapped knees, and laughed as he unswaddled his prize,

    His pride and burden: an ivory-billed woodpecker

    As big as a crow, still wailing and squealing.

     

    Upstairs, when he let it go in his workroom,

    It fell silent at last. He told at dinner

    How devoted masters of birds drawn from the life

    Must gather their flocks around them with a rifle

    And make them live forever inside books.

     

    Later, he found his bedspread covered with plaster

    And the bird clinging beside a hole in the wall

    Clear through to already-splintered weatherboards

    And the sky beyond. While he tied one of its legs

    To a table leg, it started wailing again.

     

    And went on wailing as if toward cypress groves

    While the artist drew and tinted on fine vellum

    Its red cockade, gray claws, and sepia eyes

    From which a white edge flowed to the lame wing

    Like light flying and ended there in blackness.

     

    He drew and studied for days, eating and dreaming

    Fitfully through the dancing and loud drumming

    Of an ivory bill that refused pecans and beetles,

    Chestnuts and sweet-sour fruit of magnolias,

    Riddling his table, slashing his fingers, wailing.

     

    He watched it die, he said, with great regret.

     

    “In a way, a poem is in one respect superior to a drawing, because it may follow a sequence of movements.”

     

    LI-YOUNG LEE

    IRISES

     

    I.

    In the night, in the wind, at the edge of the rain,

    I find five irises, and call them lovely.

    As if a woman, once, lay by them awhile,

    then woke, rose, went, the memory of hair

    lingers on their sweet tongues.

     

    I’d like to tear these petals with my teeth.

    I’d like to investigate these hairy selves,

    their beauty and indifference. They hold

    their breath all their lives

    and open, open.

     

                    2.

    We are not lovers, not brother and sister,

    though we drift hand in hand through a hall

    thrilling and burning as thought and desire

    expire, and, over this dream of life,

    this life of sleep, we waken dying—

    violet becoming blue, growing

    black, black—all that

    an iris ever prays,

    to be.

     

    “Poets have always been fascinated by the incomprehensible behavior of some creatures, for instance, the moth, which strives toward light and burns itself in the flame of a candle or kerosene lamp.”

    My response: We should probably focus on our own incomprehensible behavior.

     

    WISLAWA SZYMBORSKA

    IN PRAISE OF SELF-DEPRECATION

     

    The buzzard has nothing to fault himself with.

    Scruples are alien to the black panther.

    Piranhas do not doubt the rightness of their actions.

    The rattlesnake approves of himself without reservations.

     

    The self-critical jackal does not exist.

    The locust, alligator, trichina, horsefly

    live as they live and are glad of it.

     

    The killer-whale’s heart weighs one hundred kilos

    but in other respects it is light.

     

    There is nothing more animal-like

    than a clear conscience

    on the third planet of the Sun.

Comments (8)

  • awoolham

    I am overwhelmed reading this. Wow. I will have to copy and save it forever. Thank you for sharing and mentioning my name (although I don't feel that I have anything to take credit for). The poems take my breath away, and I feel them sit inside my chest.

    Congratulations again, Jen.  I know you said it's just a day you want to get over with quickly but you've worked through all those pages of books - reading and writing - for four long years. Your thoughts and actions; ideas and frustrations are all wrapped inside each year. I know how one could learn to hate or have mixed emotions about something if one is required to learn. One of the reasons I hesitate taking poetry classes (bad reasoning I think). I don't want to kill my passion.

    But now that you are distancing yourself with the obligations of learning, I am glad that you are enjoying poetry again.

    I still want to give you something that I came across the other day. It's a book, of course. You might have already read it though, now that I've had time to consider it. It's by Stephen King.

  • MyHomeIsWriting

    @awoolham - Now I'm curious which book. I haven't read all of them, I've actually read very few. Maybe once I've graduated and moved. And you do deserve credit. Without you I'm not sure I could have persevered through my own writing, and without the connection my brain made between this book and your own ability to appreciate poetry, none of this would be possible.

  • ZSA_MD

    This is amazing. Love the poems.


    And yes, Aye is an incredibly talented, beautiful and sincere lady. I know her personally, and have loved every moment of being with her. She is the true salt of that part of the earth we call home in our hearts.

  • awoolham
  • awoolham

    @ZSA_MD - ah Zakiah You're too sweet. I don't think I deserve all this praise but I am honored that you both would think of me so highly. Thank you 

  • MyHomeIsWriting

    @awoolham - I need to buy that one. I've read it, took my notes, and regarded his important points almost as religion. I can honestly say I think that book changed my life<3

  • awoolham

    I'll gladly send it to you. Just let me know.

  • darkgreenwriter

    I like the great thoughts and observations on writing you have compiled in this post. 

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